Category Archives: Writing Life

Searching for the right agent, the right word, the right phrase and frame of mind.

Strike While the Thought is Hot

You’d think I would have learned by now. To write it down. Not to trust this memory of mine. But sleep was beckoning; and the thought was so bright, the image so indelible. How could it vanish? Surely I’d remember it in the morn………

Surely not.

I keep a pad of paper and a pencil by the bedside. Because I’ve learned (again and again, it seems) if I don’t write down the phrase, or snatch of conversation or analogy so perfect even Joyce Carol Oates would nod in admiration, if I don’t write it down the minute it floats up from that inky place in my brain it will be lost forever. As last night’s was.

But I have learned. I do not go anywhere without a little Dover notebook in my purse or yoga bag or computer stachel. They are just the right size — 4″x6″ — and have charming covers. They come lined and blank. Learned the hard way to put my name, address and phone number on the inside cover of each one, too.

Because you never know when a thought is going to strike you. Or when you’ll see somthing in a completely new light. How else would I have remembered, “Her smile was as wide as her hips” or this from Ellen Meloy’s beautiful book of essays — The Anthropology of Turquoise: “…the fundamental poetry of human experience is the naming of places.”

Sometimes I jot down things that are too funny — “a glory hole is the reheating furnace glass blowers use to keep glass warm as they work.” A glory hole! It’s just too rich. And then there are the people. The Indian woman leaving the library, a stack of books nestled in the crook of her left arm, the black braid of her hair hanging down her back like a second spine. I write down the names of must read books my friends mention and scribble (at red lights, I promise) the name of an author I hear interviewed on NPR.

So what do I do with all these little snatches, the kindling I’ll use to ignite a larger piece of writing one day? After deciphering my handwriting I type them up, print them out and keep the pages in a folder to revisit. Makes me seem so erudite when I dig up a really terrific quote by an obscure painter or theologian.

Over the years these books have become more than just a place to jot random thoughts or the momentary gifts of beauty, humor and pathos that cross my path. I’d feel lost without my little Dover notebooks. They are my silent companions, first witness to the way I see the world.

Are Books Dead?

Various strands have been floating through the atmosphere of late and consequently through my alleged mind.

The LA Times recently shut down its book review section moving content and three of its now former five book review editors to a features page. I pray the NYTimes Book Review  isn’t next. Some weeks even that grande dame seems a page signature or two shy of permanent anorexia.

BookEnds Literary Agency’s July 16 discussion debated whether or not readers buy fiction in times of economic distress (file that bit of news under It was the worst of times to be a newbie novelist.) Posters to the literary blog The Elegant Variation bat back and forth the merits of leaving print media behind for the web.

So I throw it out to you, dear readers:
• How do you find your way to the books you enjoy reading? Friends’ recommendations? Book reviews? Browsing the shelves at the library? Amazon? Your local indy bookseller or big box?

• Have you changed your book buying habits of late?

• Given up on fiction for more practical books, such as those titled Your Money or Your Shirt — Surviving Today’s Financial Crises? (Although from where I sit, nothing is more practical than facing down the persistent wave of bad news with a terrific escape into someone else’s maelstrom. And I made up the title of that book.)

• The evisceration of book review sections — good for the muse or bad for the muse?  If today’s (to wit yesterday’s) model is destined for the circular file, what model would you propose for the future?

• And last but by no means least — read any good books lately?

PS  Tune in to BoomerCafe.com on Saturday, July 26. Remember those essays I promised you back in May? The ones that should have been published but weren’t? Promise now kept. Enjoy.

Research, Tailor, Personalize

Do some research on the company you are targeting.”  This classic advice given to job seekers also applies to those seeking an agent, and with the internet that research has never been easier.

No reason not to have a handle on a potential agent’s submission requirements, the types of manuscripts being sought, if  she is even accepting unsolicited submissions in the first place. Some agents want email. Some want snail mail. Some want to be left alone. Why waste time, stamp money and tunnel your carpals by submitting to someone (or many someones) who won’t read past your letter’s salutation? (Remember the “parts of a letter” diagram from fourth grade? The salutation is the “Dear Mrs. Letwinski” part.)

The web can be an even bigger help in fleshing out an agent’s special interests. Interviews abound; many agents now blog providing immensely valuable information that will enable you to narrow your search and quite possibly tailor your query. What would you rather read, “Dear Agent, I am submitting my manuscript “Bloodhounds, Bagels and Bacarat” for your review” OR “Dear Agent (and of course you’d be using the agent’s name. Spelled correctly!) I was reading an interview you delivered at the annual meeting of the Veterinary Association of America and noticed that in your youth you bred bloodhounds.” 

Will an agent offer you a contract on the strength of such a letter? Nope. (You didn’t think I was going to say yes, did you?) The point is you’ve shown that you’ve done some research and are submitting your query to someone who might very well have more than a passing interest in your book’s topic. There are no guarantees in this business. It’s one part sweat, one part luck and ten parts bloodhound. Hedge your bets. Do the research.

 Before you send out your next query, check out these blogs:

Pub Rants, BookEnds, Agent Query, Miss Snark, Red Room

The Two-Minute Miracle

Had a chance to catch up with some reading over the weekend and happened upon a great article in my Kenyon College Alumni Bulletin on alum Laura King, class of ‘86. King, now a Ph.D. in psychology, has made a career — and a good one at that — out of studying happiness.

And guess what, dear readers and fellow writers? King has determined (through hard science no less) that writing is one of the biggest, most effective, most opening-ist keys to happiness. Yes, writing! I know this might be a wee bit counterintuitive to those who occasionally consider papering the guest bath with rejection letters, but King’s research has proven otherwise.

Writing, it seems, is good for you. The article reports that “…the benefits of intensive two-minute writing sessions may be longer lasting than those of normal journal writing. King recommends focused bursts of writing.” The link betweeen mental health and quick quotidian quill-fests is so unassailable that “the phenomena has been given a name: ‘the two-minute miracle.’ ”

OK, I’m no scientist but the above results beg certain unscientific hypotheses. Are bloggers happier than other writer types since they tend to work in short bursts of word deliverment? Is this why novelists are moody and depressive? NOT because of the constant, inescapable, inevitable, and ongoing-but-one-day-surmountable rejection but because novelists write for long disciplined stretches of time instead of penning their prose in a mere two sweeps of the second hand?

The link to this latest issue is not up yet but visit the Bulletin archive anyway. Novelists will find it a great distraction between those depression-generating writing sessions. And bloggers will surely find inspiration for a two-minute miracle. Like I did just now.

Happy? You bet!

Happier? When that agent calls.

Happiest? When that agent calls with our publisher.

Is it real or is it fiction?

A common question surfaces when a novel hits the shelves: “Is it true? How much of this is based upon your own reality? Is so and so based on you? Your mother? Anyone you know?” After the shenanigans of James Frey, it’s no wonder that readers are suspect when truth seems stranger than fiction and fiction reads so powerfully it couldn’t possibly have sprung from the mind of a mere mortal.

I’ve read interviews with writers who say, “I don’t know where that character came from; he just walked across the page.” We might set a fiction ball rolling but then some magic, some alchemy between knowing and intuiting takes over and our characters take on lives of their own. First time this happened to me I felt like a real writer. (And yes, I get the irony of that last statement.) Julia Cameron nailed it when she wrote, “It’s not about making things up but taking them down.”

That’s what writers do, we take things down. We can’t help the constant listening and watching: observing how the deep navy seedpods on the undersides of poplar leaves resemble a polka dot skirt, or being struck by a comment so outrageous we rush to write it down because it just has to be used somewhere one day.

Fiction takes a seminal event and streches it, pushing and pulling it into unexpected places. And in the process truths reveal themselves. A novel is true when its wisdom resonates with readers’ own experiences; it is true when it validates and enlightens the world beyond its own printed pages; it is true when readers want the characters they have just spent hours with to be real because they were so wonderful they just have to exist out there somewhere.

When Exit Ghost came out Terry Gross asked Philip Roth the perennial question, “Is so-and-so based upon…..?” Roth’s response went something like this: “If my readers are so busy trying to figure out which characters are stand-ins for the people in my life then they are not getting to know my characters.” He might or might not have continued with “And isn’t that the purpose of reading a novel?” Far be it from me to put words into Philip Roth’s mouth. But he was right. If readers are treating a novel like a secret map to some imagined treasure, they do a disservice to the world the author has moved heaven and earth to create.

Someone once said fiction is reality but even better. So why waste our time trying to parse if this or that character is real or if certain plotlines were pulled straight from an author’s own life? A novel that transports us beyond ourselves, that opens our eyes to new possibilities, that in some small way heals us, is the treasure in and of itself.

Blogs & sites/sites & blogs

I don’t know if lassoing an agent is any easier these days but the resources afforded by the internet sure are helpful. Whatever your stage in the writing game, the sites below provide useful information, interesting discussions and good leads. Ponies, ponies everywhere. (If that reference leaves you scratching your forelock, read last week’s — 5.20.08 — post.)

agentquery.com has a solid search engine that lets you tailor your parameters according to subject matter, which agents accept email or snail mail (and if they are accepting queries in the first place.) The good folks at this site have just initiated a social networking forum as well.

www.absolutewrite.com is a great place to go once you’ve targeted a few agents to query. The site’s water cooler page gives the lowdown on other writers’ experience with a particular agent.

AAR’s site (Association of Author’s Representatives) is a bit clunky looking but the material presented is pure gold.

Alas Miss Snark is no longer posting. Overwhelmed and time-drained by her own success, Miss Snark, whose avatar is a very stern looking Bichon Frisee (nothing like my beloved McKenzie), exited the blogosphere some time ago. However past posts remain as useful and barky snarky snappy as ever.

And now for some agents who hide not ‘neath fur nor feathers.
BookEnds Literary Agency
Nelson Literary Agency
Nathan Bransford

Now scoot! Go do some writing and then, and only then, check out these blogs.